We have been doing persuasive writing for our speeches. We will say these in front of the class next week. It was easy to write because I didn't make many mistakes. It was tricky putting the Screencastify on my blog because I couldn't remember how to do it. Miss Mikayla, Catalina and Mrs Naden helped me with it.
I strongly believe being able
to control plants is the best
superpower because you can
grow food quickly, you can make
the vines come out of the ground
and you could make trees grow quickly.
If you can control plants you can
grow them quickly. This would solve
hunger and starvation. You could
also sell the fruits and earn some money.
If you could control plants you can
make the vines come out of the ground
you can slow down bad guys.
It would also be great to climb up the
plants and play.
If you could control plants then you
can make a big tree to climb up and
make a treehouse. It would be fun
to play in.
So hopefully I've convinced you that
being able to control plants is the best
super power. How would you feel if you
were playing in that tree?
to control plants is the best
superpower because you can
grow food quickly, you can make
the vines come out of the ground
and you could make trees grow quickly.
If you can control plants you can
grow them quickly. This would solve
hunger and starvation. You could
also sell the fruits and earn some money.
If you could control plants you can
make the vines come out of the ground
you can slow down bad guys.
It would also be great to climb up the
plants and play.
If you could control plants then you
can make a big tree to climb up and
make a treehouse. It would be fun
to play in.
So hopefully I've convinced you that
being able to control plants is the best
super power. How would you feel if you
were playing in that tree?
Here is my pepeha in Fijian. I will say this at the start of my speech. I didn't record my face because I was too shy.
I strongly believe being able
to control plants is the best
superpower because you can
grow food quickly, you can make
the vines come out of the ground
and you could make trees grow quickly.
If you can control plants you can
grow them quickly. This would solve
hunger and starvation. You could
also sell the fruits and earn some money.
If you could control plants you can
make the vines come out of the ground
you can slow down bad guys.
It would also be great to climb up the
plants and play.
If you could control plants then you
can make a big tree to climb up and
make a treehouse. It would be fun
to play in.
So hopefully I've convinced you that
being able to control plants is the best
super power. How would you feel if you
were playing in that tree?
I strongly believe being able
to control plants is the best
superpower because you can
grow food quickly, you can make
the vines come out of the ground
and you could make trees grow quickly.
If you can control plants you can
grow them quickly. This would solve
hunger and starvation. You could
also sell the fruits and earn some money.
If you could control plants you can
make the vines come out of the ground
you can slow down bad guys.
It would also be great to climb up the
plants and play.
If you could control plants then you
can make a big tree to climb up and
make a treehouse. It would be fun
to play in.
So hopefully I've convinced you that
being able to control plants is the best
super power. How would you feel if you
were playing in that tree?
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