Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 6 December 2021

the missing kids

 On week five the hole class were doing  a spooky story for halloween. We had to do pears in threes or twos and our stories had to be the same and I was in a three and i hop you enjoy the story that me and my friends made.    

I found it easy to write the story in my book.

I found it hard to spell.

Wednesday, 1 December 2021

christmas writing

Last week we did a christmas writing where you describe what the character did, what he or she looks like the problem and the solution. Are character was a male banana and his name was Aldi. He was grumpy all the time until the Christmas ghost showed him the meaning of Christmas.

I found it hard to write about the banana.

I found it to write on my Chromebook.

Thursday, 16 September 2021

Is Mr Wolf guilty?

 Last week we watched two videos about how Mr Wolf is not guilty and the other about how he is guilty. We had to pick one of the video we a agreed with and write about three reasons why. I think I found it extremely hard because it was challenging to find information about why Mr Wolf is guilty. 

This slide shows my planing and my three evidence. Do you think that Mr Wolf guilty?

Friday, 16 April 2021

Summer Holidays

 I was learning how to write a detail to my recount writing. My favourite story to write about was going to my cousins house. I found it hard trying to think of what to write in my writing. 

Friday, 11 September 2020

Speeches 2020

We have been doing persuasive writing for our speeches. We will say these in front of the class next week. It was easy to write because I didn't make many mistakes. It was tricky putting the Screencastify on my blog because I couldn't remember how to do it. Miss Mikayla, Catalina and Mrs Naden helped me with it.

I strongly believe being able 
to control plants is the best 
superpower because you can 
grow food quickly, you can make 
the vines come out of the ground 
and you could make trees grow quickly.
If you can control plants you can 
grow them quickly. This would solve 
hunger and starvation. You could 
also sell the fruits and earn some money.
If you could control plants you can 
make the vines come out of the ground 
you can slow down bad guys. 
It would also be great to climb up the 
plants and play. 
If you could control plants then you 
can make a big tree to climb up and 
make a treehouse. It would be fun 
to play in.
So hopefully I've convinced you that 
being able to control plants is the best 
super power. How would you feel if you 
were playing in that tree?

Here is my pepeha in Fijian. I will say this at the start of my speech. I didn't record my face because I was too shy.













I strongly believe being able 
to control plants is the best 
superpower because you can 
grow food quickly, you can make 
the vines come out of the ground 
and you could make trees grow quickly.
If you can control plants you can 
grow them quickly. This would solve 
hunger and starvation. You could 
also sell the fruits and earn some money.
If you could control plants you can 
make the vines come out of the ground 
you can slow down bad guys. 
It would also be great to climb up the 
plants and play. 
If you could control plants then you 
can make a big tree to climb up and 
make a treehouse. It would be fun 
to play in.


So hopefully I've convinced you that 
being able to control plants is the best 
super power. How would you feel if you 
were playing in that tree?











Thursday, 20 August 2020

Moa Report

 For the past two weeks we have been researching an extinct animal from New Zealand. I chose the moa because it looked like a fun one to do.

My success criteria was to use some short sentences, some sentences with joining words (and, because) and to use some sentences with extra information. I think I did all of these.

What did you learn about the moa from reading my report?

Moa were from the Dinornithiformes family.

It had rough feathers which were brown and black. It looked like an ostrich because it had a small head, long neck, large body, strong legs and no wings and it could run fast. The females were bigger than the males. It was 3.6 meters tall and it lived in the wet brush grassland and forest. His diet was made up of small stones, pebbles and plant parts and twigs and shrubs. The maori people killed moa for its meat and made fish hook jewelry from its bones. They also cut down its habitat and ate all its eggs.


Friday, 29 May 2020

Going Shopping in Pak n Save

This week we were learning to use a hook.
We had to use juicy verbs and different sentence starters.
I found it easy to use different sentence starters.
I found it tricky to write and spell.
Next time I would use a dictionary.



Tick Tock Tick Tock. I kept asking "how long are we going to be waiting. It felt like forever.
I felt bored waiting for the queue to reach the entrance. Finally we got to the door. mum grabbed
a trolley. we went to walk in. we heard the woman say "no kids allowed sorry. I have to let
grown ups in." I waited and waited but she wasn’t there. no sign of her. i felt cold and I was thinking where is she? What is she doing? she better have something good in the trolle. finally she appeared.
The nightmare was over and some else could take my place on this bench waiting for their mother.

Friday, 22 May 2020

Fiji

This week for Writing I was learning to use juicy verbs
Next time I write more.

Using a taxi to get to my Dad’s sister’s house, we ate fruit cake as soon as we got there. She gave me loving hugs and kisses, because she was excited. Her hugs felt warm and she smelt like flowers. Two days later, my Dad’s sister and I got in a taxi. I was squished. We were off to our village. We met up with my brother, Tukai. Jumping in the truck, it was a long trip to get to our village. The village was small, bare, and the houses were made out of wood. Stepping out of the house, onto the mangroves, buzzing mosquitoes bit us everywhere. I smelt like walking bug spray. Besides the mosquitoes, it was fun meeting my cousins, swimming at the rocks, and playing King of the Hill. Vinaka.



Friday, 6 September 2019

bee Report

 A  bee has five eyes two compound eyes and three tiny eyes at the top of there head.The bees have a stinger they sting when they want to protect themselves. Bees collect nectar in there pollen basket they when they get back to their hive they put honey into the honeycombs they cover it with wax beekeeper come and