I found it hard to describe what I can feel in my bedroom. I want to work on building my knowledge of describing words to add to my writing.
You can read my writing about my bedroom here:
My Bedroom
My favourite place in my house is my bed because it has warm sheets for me to lay down on. It is small like a box.
It is great and fun in my room. You can watch movies or play with my toys. My room is not kept today because it has cobwebs.
I wish I had an Xbox because sometimes I want to play but there is no one to play with because my parents are busy.
I wish I had a big TV and controllers because if my friends or family comes we can play together without taking turns. Also, I wish I had a VR station if I get bored.
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